From my book? Ok so im writing a novel and this is the beginning of it. Can you read and maybe give me a critisizim or advice? Ill even take some problems or questions you have. Thanks in advance! " is good that the hooligans in a few weeks we would start our annual creative writing project. " The class groaned. Mr. Crawford had been our teacher of English for the past few months, instead of the teacher Mrs. Thompson, who was on maternity leave. Mr. Crawford was a short, old, crazy hair, substitute teacher in our class had come to know very easily. Unfortunately, there were twenty of us and one of him, so he had a very hard time with names, except for Jeremy. That should not be a problem, the right of Mr. Scott? Jeremy was talking to one of his friends Jock Bonehead. Um ... " Jeremy " yes sure laughed and laughed to herself, " at least his daughter does not think so. " The right side of the room silently laughed. Do not get me wrong, I loved Jeremy, I mean, have been together since the beginning of the year. We are one cutest couple, twice, and had a good chance to win the prom king and queen. It's just ... sometimes, and often forget to use your brain before speaking, but do not have that problem, right? " Come see me after class Mr. Scott, and you can tell me everything. " Mr. Crawford was in good spirits. Jeff " Carey, Michael Carter, Jenna Harrison. " Jenna, one of my best friends moved here from Chicago last year. Have you ever had a best friend with whom I began to hate, then once you have to know you in love? This is how Jenna and I started. The first time I met her she was flirting with Trevor, the boy that I liked when I was a sophomore at the football game for charity in the ancient Church Hampton. Long story short, he had not started on good terms. I confronted her at a party hosted by one of his friends. She threw her drink on me and punched me in the nose. As we walked to Trevor was more of a good time watching two girls fight over him. While we were expelled both looked up and saw him do with a girl from another school. With that, we walked home together and talked things. We were together every day for cheerleading and she was with me all summer Brooke went to Arizona. We became best friends quickly and was received in our group with open arms. Jenna also the dates of my other best friend, Ryan. Aaron Herbinger " Sarah Howard, Alexandra Martin. " Um ... Allie. Oh yeah I talked " ", Allie, sorry Mr. " Crawford wrote something down in his notebook, " Andrea Mattingly, Rachael May, Shayne McDonald. Ugh ". Shayne McDonald. Have you had a girl in your class, you know, thinking that is ten million times better than others? Well, then you've met someone like Shayne McDonald. We used to be friends until the second grade when he accidentally dough in her hair, she had to get almost all cut and blamed me because all the kids called her bucket head. We lost touch over the summer and was never the same. His father owned the top modeling agency in Morton Heights and gave birth to the top model. Of course, I had a hot boyfriend, who was also the all-star basketball player, best friends hotter and, well, was quite popular. I mean every animator is, right? Christian " Mowry, Antwon Neal, we all know that Jeremiah ", Jeremy shot and look bad. Oops ", Jeremy is here. " Mr. Crawford said sarcastically. " Brittany Oliver, Cameron Price, Molly Robinson, Ryan Scott. " Ryan, Ry or as I call it, has been my friend for as long as I can remember. He is like the older brother I never had, despite being three weeks longer than him. When we were little my mom told us they were inseparable and that people always thought they were brother and sister. Once when we were eight years old, and I found some matches and lighter fluid on my ship, we stayed behind to get the records and I sprayed lighter fluid on them. Both tried, unsuccessfully, to light the match (we do not really understand the concept). Finally, lit one and threw it on the pile of wet wood. Flames shot through the sky and the next thing we know his mom is running toward us with a dissatisfied look on his face. We were both grounded for two weeks, and until today, I never regret having that much fun. We spent every summer together alone and together we walked to and from school, even taught me how to skateboard. Even now, as students from third mistake people still with us for a couple, that has happened since about fifth grade. Whenever I need help with Brooke or Jenna or anyone else for that matter is there. I talk to him anytime you want really, because he lives next door. Aaron Smith, Sophia Wal ... " " Brooke Brooke! " " Please call me Brooke, Mr. Crawford ". Brooke " sorry man, I'll get it right one day. " " He smiled and said "Is that everyone? " Sophia and Brooke had been my best friend since were nine. She was the quiet girl, shy and I was the strong focus. There is no connection right? Wrong. In our field day in third grade, the first time we met, my ex-friend Shayne plotted revenge and decided it would be fun to put a sauce full of tampons in my blanket and cry " EW Allie had a minor accident & quot;. Brooke let me borrow a pair of shorts and healed my broken heart. Shayne also beat up pretty good, but she does not know I saw it. Why? Excellent question, maybe I just wanted to take to the skinny girl. Since then we have been tied at the hip. He convinced me to join the cheerleading squad and spent all day, every summer (except for going into ninth grade) together. Singing and joking with a good time. The summer is in ninth grade, his mother died and she spent the summer in Arizona with his grandparents. I called every day and talk nonstop. Dinngggggggg! Page 764 " was Monday! " Mr. Crawford mumbled just before the world exploded in the room. Uf " can you believe it, the task of the weekend of PROM? " Brooke and I were walking down the hallway filled with some of the girls cheerleading. " Oh my God! This night is gonna be so fun! " " Yes, provided it does not spike the punch, as in the last dance. " Some of the girls sang. Brooke ", you will be fine, I'll help with English, if you help me with my calculus. Yes it will be very exciting. I laughed ", " I'm glad Jeremy is, perhaps this is not going to end up drunk and mad. Amber " intervened: " You are lucky, because honey, your boyfriend is right. He got the body of the sights of the ... Hey baby " ", " said Jeremy as Amber was finishing his-man-expression is so thin. Everyone was packed around my closet. " Are you ready for tonight, because I'm ready to ... " turned, put his hand in the air and galloped into the middle aisle. BUST A movement " " said gallantly, as he turned back and escorted me and my locker. " Hey Al, I'll see you at the mall, five o'clock. " Brooke added, " Jeremy Nice moves, a better job that turn on if you want to win tonight the prom king. " She said the group turned away in fear. Jeremy was tall, lean and tanned skin which had supplemented her jet black hair. Her royal blue leather jacket and black (with his basketball patches sewn on the back) and dirty jeans, along with your favorite black and white Nike. It was easily the most popular guy in school, was a star on the basketball court, his parents were rich, he always had the best clothes, shoes, and of course, a Range Rover as their sixteenth birthday. When will you grow? " I smiled and kissed him gently. He tried to lower his voice, as if he thought I was angry with him, " I ' m sorry baby, will not happen again ", " he opened his eyes but I have a good surprise for you. " took a small black rectangular box. " Oh, Jeremy, you should not have. " I assured him I slowly opened the box, you expect more of the content held. " Yes, what you make of that ", exclaimed with pride. He approached me and whispered in his ear, is a suit ". " " No, really should not have. " I closed my locker and shoved the box back into his chest. " can not believe how insensitive ", he shouted, as Brooke, Jenna, and I shuffled through the mall Heights Morton. " I can not believe they actually have a room for you, Brooke " said, laughing. Jenna spoke at " You know it's the only girl that actually has got a space to simply take all the other girls to her house, and laughed. " Oh, my God, this is not as funny. I cried as we walked through the mall. I am going through a crisis of relationship here, and you two, of all people are laughing and making jokes! We have been coming out of this whole year to get to this point and I ca .... Allie " " ", " I can not take this I am referring to my ... Allie " "? " My mom is going crazy because tonight is my first dance and ... ALEXANDRA MARTIN " " HAPPINESS! Brooke " cried as we went to a shop. Jenna interjected: " Wow, that broke the full name. " Brooke grabbed my shoulders and looked into my eyes " Listen, I'm your best friend, I love you and Jeremy Jeremy. .. but so is a boy and boys are a little confused about what they want now ". " But Brooke room key, a room key, what kind of surprise is that supposed to be ? sadly " argued. " What will I do? " " How do you know he wants to have sex Al, just want to talk or something " Brooke concluded. " Yes, and maybe tomorrow it will snow in Florida. " Jenna replied sarcastically before they pulled through the hanger. I sighed as I looked across the sea of necklaces. Anyway " is not as if for the first time there, I mean, come on, what's the problem? " Jenna said. The big problem was that I loved Jeremy. Somewhere between dumb comments, your body warm, and study habits ridiculous (not included the study) I fell in love. Never before had I went all the way with someone I loved, and to tell the truth, I was afraid. In my opinion, it is easy to give yourself to a guy at a party or one of his brothers, friends, were more likely to lose anyway, and if not, its not like your going to have a future relationship, so nobody is damage. Harmless fun. The idea of having that special moment in that special moment with the one person who you love more, so they made me sick. To think that I'm going to see me when I took a more vulnerable headache. I think " just relax, because honestly ... " When I looked up waiting for some good advice that best friend. " Your boyfriend is so good! " Brooke and Jenna mumbled in unison just before bursting into laughter. I quietly laughed to myself before facing them. " I just ... I know I expected more from him, I mean it's been almost a year and he has not said anything about it before ". Except " Trevor's party. " boasting Jenna exclaimed. I looked around and sighed for Brooke: " Oh, thank you, Jenna, adding that the wonderful piece of information in the conflict, and how many times I have to say, was drunk. " When Jeremy and I were together for a few months in the middle of the year, Trevor Dennison launched this great back to school bash for all young people. It was crazy, almost everyone was drinking, the walls were full of high school students to break out pieces and the football team called for real strippers. Talk about a high school blowout. Jeremy offered to take up a space for a bit of harmless fun. We start and was into it at first, but for some reason, while we were in room scenes floating in my head, the room started spinning and suddenly was not feeling well. I realized that I liked more than any other man who had gone this far and I still do not understand if I liked that feeling. I quickly got up and looked my superior. I walked to the door but let me pass. I said I was drunk and got into an argument that is way out of hand. I broke up with him that night and went home crying hysterically, crying, I called Jenna and Brooke, and told them all that, unfortunately, I did not know was that I was coming back to haunt the rest of my life. Where is Brooke "? " Jenna said, looking around. His phone rang and his eyes lit up. It must have been Ryan. He approached a bench and sat down. I looked up and saw my best friend. I was talking to a guy who looked as if he worked in the food court. He was a tall blonde, it seemed like maybe in twenty years. At that time, Shayne burst into the store as we were on our way out. She wore a baby doll top with Capri and heels accompanied by a beautiful coach bag that had not even seen in stores yet. His father was clearly pulled some strings. Shayne had dirty blond hair that fell in the middle of the back. She was so (probably from its recent purchase of a tanning bed, I know, because she practically announced to the class of our fourth quarter last week) with blue eyes and her makeup was very well done, almost looked professional . Although I thought she was the daughter of the devil, and he hated to admit it, Shayne was very pretty, their own skanky way. She was always together and never out of fashion. That did not stop me trying everything we can to humiliate his " Look what the cat dragged ", said as she entered the store. " Look what the cat spit " she said again. Shayne had two friends, and liked to call them thugs, Courtney and Lindsey, who followed her everywhere like a flock of geese. " Oh, Allie, although known only to friends I had told her hips look like a packet of sausages on jeans. " Oh yes, because you know so much about being a good friend, right? I replied. Courtney spoke at " Oh yeah, and maybe someday you'll be as beautiful and as popular as Shayne ". " That is the day, or expected, should be the day today because I am sure she will not win prom queen tonight. I replied. I looked at each other and walk quickly scanned for Brooke. It was nowhere ". " Is there a problem here Lady and the Tramp? Brooke " already entered the conversation. " Oh, you have come to be in the parade, waiting, the freak show is not until the 28th, (which referred to " The lights of the celebration of California "), his girlfriend well you need all the practice you can get ". Shayne said in view of Brooke. " You know all about what sense you, Tweedle Dee and Tweedle dumb, won first prize last year. Tell me, what was difficult to walk and talk like an idiot at the same time? Brooke waiting on an answer, then told Shayne " Whatever, I'll see you tonight, my crown of queen of the feast that awaits me, and you just would hate to lose. " She and her followers away laughing. " One of these days I'll show her ... ugh. " " I complained Come on guys, I have to be home to 530 so my mom can take pictures. Started. " So who was that cutie in the food court? " I called him. Jenna " he said. " Wait, I thought you were going to dance with Jay? " " She was cute, I had to see out. " Brooke said, he is twenty and he just moved here from North Carolina. ", added he, his mother and younger brother live in the river, probably by you. Miss America " " Well, you get your number? I laughed ", " But of course, my dear Alexandra " She said boasting, because he had a napkin with a strand of black number on it. Laughing, we left the store and again to get the shakes. I saw Courtney and Lindsey on 21st Street fighting for a shirt little sparse. I smiled, " are definitely going to be running against him for the title of Miss America. " Together, Brooke, Jenna and I left the mall. Tonight " will be so fun " Brooke laughed. A Night To Remember " ". " Hey Mama, I'm home. " My house was unusually quiet. Mom "? " I went into the living room. Dad "? " I went into the kitchen and found a note. Allie, who said: "Your father and I are attending the charity dinner for the job. We'll be home around 630. Try to eat something, start preparing and we'll see when we get home. Love, Mom PS-Feed one for me please, your meal is in the garage. With the house to myself, I opened the fridge and grabbed a water bottle. Then I heard a strange noise. Pum, pum, pum. I stopped, the noise stopped. I quickly got into the garage to feed Max, our golden retriever. Walking back to the house heard the sound again. This stronger and faster, bang, bang, bang. What is it "? " I thought to myself. The strange continuous sound. I went through the back door and opened the fence at the edge. My house sat on the edge of a cliff overlooking the river and across the river was around the city. A little beyond my backyard through the white picket fence and the river front was a little open lot. Before, when we were in fifth grade, some elderly couple cleared the trees and was set to build a house, until the man died shortly before they began to build. It has ever felt empty. As I walked down the path of the coastline known to be careful. A stone path was the only way to get to the bottom. Trees and shrubs covered any other input. Ryan and I come here all the time when we were young and range from Tyrolean we built that ran down the river. " Once, when Brooke and I freshman who rushed to see the lights of California ". " Was this big party right before Halloween, which had carnival games, games, and all kinds of booths . At nine, every year we organized a fireworks show on the big river to bless the ghosts of Halloween, and every year Brooke, Ryan and I would watch it together. Well, when we were running down the gravel path tripped and fell, and down the hill with me Brooke. Ryan laughed so hard he fell too and we all looked the fireworks with his body bruised. At the waterfront there is a field of medium to the left. On the right is an old, dilapidated basketball goal, accompanied by wooden swing overlooking the entire city. When we were kids, Brooke and I escaped and are here to talk. We never brought anyone here, but Ryan, and Jenna was not until we accept that nobody else knows. That was our special place, we could go there to think or read or do anything. I had not been there in a while. Water bottle in hand I went through the wooden barricade Brooke and I built in the sixth grade to maintain and Dylan Thomas Perry out. As already clarified through the bushes I saw a hooded figure high on a ladder, hammer in hand, against the basketball goal. At first I thought it was Ryan and not until I got closer I realized it was not him. He struck a wooden board over the old and dismember the rim. I started running down. " Hey you! " I stammered: " What do you think your doing? " Surprised, the figure looked at me and started down the stairs. I walked toward him. When I finally approached him, drew his head phones and started talking. " Sorry, I did not know anyone lived here. " I stepped over the bushes and approached him " I just moved here I either ... " interrupted. " Look, I do not care where you moved from or how you got here. This is my property and I do not think you have permission to be hammered around like a madman, and why you wear a hoodie in 80 degree weather? I was breathless. Slowly he took his cap, began to speak. He was tall, muscular and dark brown hair was cut off the ears, along with the pins. The boy had a soft face, slender body and the most beautiful green eyes I had ever seen. He spoke again: " Look sorry if I bothered you, my name is ... " wore a blue sweatshirt Duke University, accompanied by a blue basketball shorts and black and white shoes Air Jordan basketball. I was stunned for a short time. I thought to myself, 'What's wrong with me, as I have never seen a cute boy before. " Was still speaking, so maybe we could be fri ... " I looked at my watch, it was six or ' clock and still had to prepare. I stopped seeing him, " It's OK to not have time to deal with it now, I have a graduation party to go now, and when I return I hope that is gone, You got Bob the Builder? He stammered back, "Yes ... Sure, whatever. I started up the hill and yelled at me. " Hey, can I get your number, you know, just in case I forget my hammer and tools here. Just so I can get back to me? " I turned around, the pick-up lines guys use today. I fiddled through my pockets and found what I was looking for. I threw the coin and told him, " face could get my number, tails go. " He caught it and even cried. Bosses who is ". " had problems with currency. " So, you still have to go? " I went into my back door and was greeted by my mother. Hi honey " ", went to close the door, " Where have you been? ", I replied. " Nowhere, just walking up ". Well " sit there, your dad and I have some good news. " I went into the living room, no way was I prepared for the news I have received. Moving " " " cried. Does it move! " My father stammered: " Honey, it's only for a couple of years we can come back and visit anytime. " " No, Dad, a couple of years is too long, what about Brooke, Ryan, and Jenna, and Jeremy and the cheerleading squad. You think about them? Sweetheart " ", my mother said softly. " can make new friends in Michigan, and I'm sure he has a team of cheerleaders ". Michigan ... Michigan " ", I cried. Your " moves me halfway across the county away from everything I love and that is supposed to be good news? " " I can not believe you two now. & quot ; I got up and turned my back " was a very good job offer and his father had taken. " I started to my room. Miss " Look, this is my house and my rules, its motion to Michigan while you like it or not. " My mother scolded me. " No mom, I said ": " Now I'm going to my prom first, and probably last graduation party at Morton heights, do not talk, do not try to take photos. Just stay here and think about how much it is ruining my life. " My father tried to talk while walking down the stairs. Alexandra ", cooperation " honey ... I closed the door and smothered her face in my pillow. After a few minutes I got up and looked out the window, well, the boy was gone. Lying in my bed, I found myself thinking about him, it was very nice and kind of ingenious way in his own small. I looked at my watch and realized that it was seven o'clock. Brooke and Jeremy would be here to pick me up in an hour. I took a shower, fixed her hair and makeup, and then slipped the red head dress. I was putting on my shoes and bag ready when I saw Jeremy pull in my drive. I grabbed my things and he met me at the door. Instead of waiting inside my house limo sat in his car. Allie " what wrong girl? " " Nothing, ready to go " Jeremy sighed and got out. I looked back and saw the limousine. It was an Escalade limousine and occupied most of my driveway. Brooke stuck his head through the sun roof and shouted: " Your baby party time! " The way the gala was nothing less than I expected. The car always included most of the basketball team and cheerleaders over me, Jeremy, Brooke, Jay, Jenna, and Ryan. Everyone was laughing and having a good time while I was marinating in my parents' recent decision to move away from all mankind. Brooke noticed that something was wrong, she slipped and sat between me and Jeremy. What ' s " up girl? " Brooke asked panting after singing car wash with the rest of our team. I replied that covers my true feelings. I looked up " You know the last time we were in a limo was for our eighth grade dance, remember? " " Yes, and Ryan were together. And Jenna was very angry with me because I went with Aaron Gates. She replied back ". I laughed, " and we spent forty minutes in the bathroom trying to get her dress blow that Ryan spilled on you because I was very nervous. We laughed. " Those were the good times eh? " She laughed. " Hey stop looking backwards, trying to have some fun tonight okay? " " Just promise me you'll have fun tonight okay? " " I will. " I assured him. When we entered the hotel Belmont we all looked around with eyes wide open. Black and blue streamers covered the walls of the beautiful ballroom. The hardwood floor through the roof while the sun shone and was reflected in every girl's jewelry. Everyone was dollies above the head to toe. The girls have their hair and nails together with the kids in costumes of fresh cuts and new. The stage was in the middle of the room into a giant disco ball, surrounded by several small foci. Balloons and confetti expenditure was incurred by a large basket, about to fall when they announced king and queen. The room was full of adrenaline pumped teen ready for a night of fun. All grace came downstairs ballroom and find a table to put our things. Ryan and Jenna sat together, while Jay and Brooke everyone has some punch. Jeremy and I were on the dance floor dancing the night away. He must have been drinking a little. Soon everyone joined us and we were all with a bang as the sole and made his entrance. Shayne went downstairs ballroom accompanied by a boy who had never seen before. She was wearing a medium blue dress with silver sequins many small patch on it, along with the silver shoes that had the same sequins on them. Around his neck was the most beautiful diamond I had ever laid my eyes on. It was white, surrounded by many smaller blue diamond chain around. With every move he made one of the worldwide diamond caught the light and blinded in the ballroom. " She always has to make an entrance ", I said to Jeremy, who was staring in awe Shayne. No dijo nada por un segundo entonces le contestó, "Whoa, she's hot." Yo le miraba con incredulidad y salió corriendo a la mesa. Como yo estaba haciendo mi camino a través de la multitud algo me cogió del brazo. "Mira Baby I'm Sorry, yo no estaba pensando. Voy a estar en la sala a las once y media. "Cogí el brazo de distancia y siguió caminando. Se dirigió hacia otro lado para hablar con uno de sus compañeros de baloncesto. A veces me preguntaba qué me gusta tanto. Me senté en la mesa y empezó a hablar con una de las jóvenes animadoras. De vez en cuando me levanto la vista para mirar el reloj. Iba en once y media. En ese momento, Brooke se acercó a mí, sus ojos tan grandes como pelotas de golf. "Allie venga rápido, Jenna necesita ayuda." Me levanté de mi asiento con un sentido de urgencia, y seguido Brooke a la playa de estacionamiento. Cuando me acerqué a la limusina que vi los pies colgando de un coche y abrir la puerta sin un zapato. "Su bebé está bien vamos a llegar a casa." Ryan estaba sentado en el coche la celebración de una figura flaca. "¿Es que Jenna?" Me reí. Brooke habló, "Una de las chicas trajo una cantimplora de vodka, y Lindsay Lohan aquí derribado todo el asunto". "Todo?", Exclamé. -Pues alguien tiene que llevarla a su casa, pero ella va a estar en tantos problemas. "¿Y si llevo a mi casa y uno de ustedes puede decir simplemente que se quedó con usted? "Ryan sugirió mientras se apoya en su novia borracha. "Brooke puede pasar la noche conmigo y me limitaré a decirle a mi mamá que es Jenna." Le expliqué. "No tengo ningún plan esta noche ¿no?" Ella le contestó: "No, pero lo hace, dónde está Jeremy? Suspiré. "No sé, probablemente en la sala." Ryan me miró. "Allie, sólo tenga cuidado, yo sé que no puedo cuidar de ti como solía hacerlo, pero sólo quiero que usted piensa sobre las cosas. Lo agarré y le dio un abrazo. Jenna estaba profundamente dormido. "Siempre se puede cuidar de mí hermano mayor." Me besó en la cabeza y cerró la puerta limusina. "Ustedes me arrastran a veces." Brooke se quejó. ¿Tiene usted dos que salió? "Me reí de nuevo" Sí, cuando éramos cinco y me pidió que me casara con él. Brooke y yo caminamos en el interior del brazo a la pista de baile. En el camino en el señor Murray, el director, fue en el escenario anunciando que el rey y la reina del baile. Miré por encima del salón de baile para Jeremy, pero no pudo encontrarlo. La habitación estaba llena de anticipación como el Sr. Murray recogió el sobre. "Y ahora, por el momento que todos hemos estado esperando, la coronación de este rey año prom y reina del baile. Voy a anunciar la primera reina. "Comenzó un redoble de tambor. Se hizo el silencio en la habitación y la voz del Sr. Murray fue el único que habló. "Este año Morton Heights High School Prom Queen es ..." Él abrió el sobre. "McDonald Shayne!" Brooke y yo nos miramos el uno al otro y sonrió. La cantó miró a su alrededor y Shayne no era donde se encuentra. El Sr. Murray volvió a hablar, "McDonald Shayne puede usted por favor venga y aceptar su corona?" "Bueno, ella consiguió lo que quería, como siempre." Suspiré. Brooke me consoló. "Oh, no te preocupes por esa chica. Ella sólo ganó porque su vestido de todo el mundo ciego y ni siquiera podía ver a nadie más. Apoyé mi cabeza sobre su hombro y miró el reloj. Iba en doce años. Courtney y Lindsay salió al escenario para recibir la corona de Shayne allí hacia abajo, los dos se peleaban por ella como los niños pequeños en una caja de arena. "Jeremy me dijo que estaría en la habitación a las once y media." Brooke me miró con asombro. "¿Por qué diablos no estás allí, entonces?" Me sonrió y miró a ella. "¿Crees que debería?" Ella me miró con ojos serios. -Al, creo que deberías hacer lo que quieres hacer y dejar de preocuparse por lo malo que puede pasar, ir por él tigre. "Me empujó y me dijo que me encontraría en casa a las tres. Me metí en el ascensor y me dirigí hasta el quinto piso. Las puertas del ascensor se abrieron lentamente y salí al pasillo solo. Buscando a través de mi bolsa para la llave de la habitación, me acerqué a la puerta. Llave en mano miraba fijamente el número de la habitación por un momento. Después de haber reunido todo el valor de mi cuerpo que finalmente empujó la pesada puerta. La habitación era negro. Entré y encendí la luz más cerca que pude encontrar. La sala iluminada, a la derecha era una pequeña cocina, que incluía una pequeña estufa, un microondas y un pequeño refrigerador en la pared. A bar top stood in the middle with a small sink on one side and two stools on the other. On the opposite side of the bar was a small living room, with a flat screen television, couch and recliner. The bathroom was on the left across from the kitchen. “Wow, he really went all out,” I spoke to myself. Over to the left the master bedroom door was shut. I slowly approached it, “Jeremy? Are you in there?” I knocked twice and walked in. As I opened the door I heard heavy breathing and saw two figures on the bed. With cruel intentions I flipped on the lights. “Oh my god!” The girl figure screamed and rolled over. As she was turning over the male figure jumped up, it was Jeremy. Regretting going up there I took a look at the female figure, to my surprise, it was Shayne. My mouth dropped and tears started forming in my eyes. I slammed the door and started towards the hall. I heard someone behind me, and as I was attempting to open the other door, the person shut it. “Baby wait, let me explain.” “I turned with tears streaming down my face. “EXPLAIN! You want me to let you explain why you were in bed with that slut!” I opened the door and started out. “Baby I was drunk, and I didn’t know if you were going to come up…” So you decided to sleep with her huh?” I was trying to hold in the tears and speak at the same time. “Jeremy I tried, I gave you a chance, I took your *********, I took it all, and this is how you repay me! You said you loved me! I was done I turned around and left him standing in front of the door in only his boxers. “Wait, wait, so what’s this mean?” He stuttered. Without turning around I screamed at the top of my lungs. “Were over!” The elevator door opened, I stepped in and pressed the lobby button. Once the doors closed I fell to my knees and started bawling. I arrived down in the lobby and walked out the front doors no one even saw me leave. I didn’t know how far the hotel was from my house and personally I didn’t care, all I knew, was that I had to get away from there. It started to rain. Shoes in hand I started walking down the street with tears streaming down my face. Tyler watched her walk up the hill and smiled. “Well isn’t she something else.” He gathered up his tools and started up to his house. When he walked in he found his brother still in his work uniform sitting on the couch playing the Xbox 360, and his mother in the kitchen working on dinner. “Hey beautiful,” he walked over to his mother, kissed her on the cheek and put his things down. “Hey Tyler, where have you been?” “He responded back, “Oh down the river there is a little court and I just took dads tools down there to see if I could fix it up a bit.” Trey looked over from his video game “Why did you take dads tools?” “I don’t know, I didn’t think I was going to get interrogated for it.” Their mother spoke, “okay boys that’s enough.”
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